How to Improve Your Web site in just 7 Days!
Hi Todd,
I just want to let you know that I really enjoyed the seminar that you gave in Brantford at the Brantford Golf & Country Club.
You made things sound so simple! and had great ideas.
Signs of a very good speaker.
Thank you for the suggestions for my website.
Since then i have revamped my site and would like you to take a look at it and ask if I may, for your input.
I appreciate anything you have to offer.
It is not complete yet, as you will see, but am working on it.
thank you
sincerely
the chocolate pajama lady
cathy bohemier
P.S. this is what i sent out to my customers
Valentines Day is only 7 days away!.
Time to start thinking about what you are going to get your special someone!
I have attached some gift ideas for your sweethearts.
Give the Gift of Healthy Dark Belgian Chocolate
and
Silky but Cozy Cuddle Satin Pajamas to snuggle in!
Chocolate you can have 3-5 times a day Guilt Free!
Caffeine-Free
Diabetic Friendly
Increases Energy
Full of Antioxidants
Tastes Great!
For Further Pampering Visit My Sew Special Sleepwear website at
Click on Valentines Day and enjoy the Cuddly Soft Satin Pajama Sets Available.
Call Cathy,
Delivery FREE in Brantford
5% discount on PICK UP ORDERS
MasterCard, Visa, Cash.
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Wow Cathy, what a difference this new web site organization will make! And you did all this in one week! I'm sure you were working hard.
You have moved the menu to the left side and now you are not selling just pajamas, but you are selling the reasons why pajamas are a great gift! And each reason is a potential keyword search, so, each gets it's own page. Well done.
I also like the comet trail that brings the visitors eye right to your headline!
When you think about each of these pages, think about how the images of your product can be delivered in a way that is consistent with the themes of each page.
Also, consider your calls to action.
For instance, you've got a call to action - Click here for Chocolate, but it would be better to have something as prominent for your email list. In particular, you might want to have a large button that says something like: Remind me of seasonal specials.... Think about your offer, then put a fairly large button where folks can click through to sign up.
My guess is that your business can quickly expand across the country and you might want to eventually reconsider the - by Cathy in your brand name. Your page looks impressive and with time, Search Engine Optimization will bring you lots of new web site visitors. To get started, make sure the keywords, description and title tags are optimized for each page.
You've also got a lot of text near the top of your page that is an image.... better to have this text as text on the page, and be sure to be liberal with your keywords there too as well as in the alt tags of the images.... ie: valentines day gift pj's
Cathy, I'm so proud of what you've done. Keep up the good work.
todd.
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